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colour me beautiful by ~bustle:iconbustle:



Memories are the only thing that paint the moonless sky tonight, for this time is ours. Finally we have settled in to collect the pieces of our broken hearts and sew them on to the nights velvet canvas. A patch work of red hues soon lighting our lonely minds, turning our shattered thoughts into stars so numerous that not even the most brilliant light could make them fade.

The darkness has become one with us now, wrapping its breezes around us like the forboding wings of a raven. Soft and subtle, but still sharp enough to remind us that we are still breathing.

So colour me beautiful, colour me forgotten, finish attaching whats left of my heart to yours. We are mending what counts, we are leaving all that matters. We are building our stair case to the stars.

And if you fall, I promise to pick up your pieces. And if you fall, I promise to stay with you. And if you fall, I will fall with you. And if you fall...

We will burn out like shooting stars.

And if you fall....

Just promise me you won't forget to breathe.
©2004-2009 ~bustle
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memories: good or bad should be remembered for eternity. to find love and to be loved are two of the most greatest things in the world. it is just a pity that i have lost mine.

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:iconsnowbirdsandtownies:
:eyepopping: *speechless* That...was beautiful. :+fav:

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"Man, it takes a silly girl to lie about the dreams she has, but Lord, it takes a lonely one to wish that she had never dreamt at all." -Dashboard Confessional "Carve Your Heart Out Yourself"
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aw thank you, i am glad that you liked it. and thanks alot for the favs! :D

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wow, that's really good! :+fav:

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aw thanks for the comment, favs and adding me to your friends list! :)

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I will agree with the people who have commented before me in that it is both beautiful, good, and indeed I was left speechless, just reading all your prose entries over and over and over again. However I will only comment on this one as I am already afraid I have flooded you with too many. (Though can one really ever have enough comments?)
Anyways, what makes your prose so beautiful and good I believe, is your power of imagery as well as your beautiful diction. It all seens to flow and stumble where it should, where emotions play out or battle against one another. I'm not prone to look at many prose entries but I thought I would give yours a read and I am glad that I did. :)
:iconabbyn0rmal:
I will agree with the people who have commented before me in that it is both beautiful, good, and indeed I was left speechless, just reading all your prose entries over and over and over again. However I will only comment on this one as I am already afraid I have flooded you with too many. (Though can one really ever have enough comments?)
Anyways, what makes your prose so beautiful and good I believe, is your power of imagery as well as your beautiful diction. It all seens to flow and stumble where it should, where emotions play out or battle against one another. I'm not prone to look at many prose entries but I thought I would give yours a read and I am glad that I did. :)

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